Sunday, March 4, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday


Another snippet from Downpour. I'd love to hear what you think.




He regards me for a long time, then finally asks, “You gonna tell me what’s goin’ on?” His Southern often shows more when he’s irritated or upset.
I sigh and reply, “I don’t really know.”
Sitting down beside me on the couch, he asks, “Well, did the fridge talk shit about your momma?”
He catches me off guard and I say, “No!” louder than I had wanted.
“Okay, then why were you hollering and throwing food in the shop?”
“I was pissed.”
“No shit.”


What do you think?

2 comments:

  1. I love, love the picture here, as well as the six. I laughed out loud over the "did the fridge talk shit about your momma" line. Loved it!

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  2. Yeah, Clint has a way with words. Jesse too. I hope you'll like them :)

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